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Okay :) So I liked that we find out Lurian's backgound and his parents schemes quickly. I appreciate how effed up it is, too haha.

But I also found myself getting impatient that we were so much in his head and in his feelings here, instead of him doing or even just saying more. So much internal, so little external. I suspect it's for him to later grow more in this regard but still, it makes me a little impatient.

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